tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8672627032139097381.post6651384697723958176..comments2022-12-12T07:49:41.320-05:00Comments on Kris F. Oliver: Walk the Plank- JulyKris F. Oliverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15693161921442719783noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8672627032139097381.post-62502639999348718012013-07-28T11:30:36.067-04:002013-07-28T11:30:36.067-04:00Thanks Heidi! And I know what you mean, 200 words ...Thanks Heidi! And I know what you mean, 200 words is not easy. I had to cut a ton of words. Apparently, I don't do short. :)<br /><br />Can't wait to read yours. I'll have to pop on over to your blog to check it out.<br /><br />Kris F. Oliverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15693161921442719783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8672627032139097381.post-12159330787690828862013-07-27T15:14:07.439-04:002013-07-27T15:14:07.439-04:00Wonderful writing, Kris! This really had a great s...Wonderful writing, Kris! This really had a great sense of time and place. I wanted to know more about the characters and how they came to be there, which was obviously such a difficult thing for both of them. 200 words seems impossible to me, but I'm going to give it a try....<br /><br />Excellent!<br />Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07265594326836770073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8672627032139097381.post-40952874340123331462013-07-26T19:14:39.661-04:002013-07-26T19:14:39.661-04:00I LOVED your piece too! I wanted to comment on it,...I LOVED your piece too! I wanted to comment on it, but I'm getting an error message when I try. I tried 3 times because...boy do you have a way with words! (Could be human error with the error messages...lack of sleep and all. I sort of stayed up all night reading Outlander. I blame you. :)Kris F. Oliverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15693161921442719783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8672627032139097381.post-2103559222546088242013-07-26T19:12:15.614-04:002013-07-26T19:12:15.614-04:00Thanks! I can't wait to see what you come up w...Thanks! I can't wait to see what you come up with, because I just know it's going to be awesome!!<br /><br />And this was so much fun, I think I'm going to be hooked. Is there such a thing as a Flash Fiction Junkie? :) Kris F. Oliverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15693161921442719783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8672627032139097381.post-45755488434064347442013-07-26T19:10:06.509-04:002013-07-26T19:10:06.509-04:00Awww...thanks!
I love that you can just write one...Awww...thanks!<br /><br />I love that you can just write one snippet of a scene with Walk The Plank/Flash Fiction. My problem....I kept typing. And typing. Because dammit I want to give these characters a little more to be going on with. *wink* And then I had to cut it all. Boo.<br /><br />I LOVED your piece as well. So much fun!! (Anyone reading this who hasn't read it should go jump on Erin's blog and Read It Now! (I'll wait) *drums fingers* See...I told you!)Kris F. Oliverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15693161921442719783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8672627032139097381.post-32525734590599454152013-07-26T18:44:24.194-04:002013-07-26T18:44:24.194-04:00Oooh - I love this! Nice job. It's very atmosp...Oooh - I love this! Nice job. It's very atmospheric. I'm sad not to read those other 200 words you wrote! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8672627032139097381.post-51728248272497798062013-07-26T15:07:06.261-04:002013-07-26T15:07:06.261-04:00That was beautiful! Fabulous job getting it down t...That was beautiful! Fabulous job getting it down to 200 words.<br /><br />I've never written flash fiction either. I won't have time to fit it in this month but hopefully next! I'm glad we're doing this at YAB. :)Ghenet Myrthilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12621168379560585094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8672627032139097381.post-25638731879509880382013-07-26T13:34:49.545-04:002013-07-26T13:34:49.545-04:00Look at you GO with your bad self!
Excellent, exc...Look at you GO with your bad self!<br /><br />Excellent, excellent writing, my friend - I am so happy you took a stab at this! And definitely think you should consider writing more flash fiction, because this...well, it was AWESOME. <br /><br />My favorite line:<br /><br />This simple gesture he could never do in public, made my insides collapse like a waterfall at my feet.<br /><br />Aaaahhhhh. Just awesome, Kris. Loved it!<br />Erin L. Schneiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13724907482299321322noreply@blogger.com